Tuesday, March 23, 2021

The application of Unit 8 videos

HOMEWORK FOR THURSDAY, 3/25- Read your first draft aloud.  Mark up a copy, on paper OR electronically to show in class.

Assignment:  COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY FROM COMMON APP

You are writing an essay using one topic below.  You will create a response that will establish the reader that you are unique and special.   You want them to select you above all other candidates.

(Think of this as one of the examples you have read to prepare for the RA essay.  You are creating an essay that will establish your point and persuade your audience and show them the REAL you)

**This is your chance to be the speaker/ author and convince others of your perspective

/**Remember, Thousands of others will be writing essays on your topic

Directions: 

CREATE: SOAPSTONE  and a planning list of Rhetorical; Devices to establish your point (Will you use figurative language, directional punctuation, narrative, emotions, logic, etc.)

YOU MUST ESTABLISH CREDIBILITY IN YOUR ESSAY.

ASSIGNMENT 1: 

You select  ONE topic below and write the essay :  

Audience 1:   The college admissions counselor from the college of your choice

*In your SOAPSTONE FOR EACH ESSAY, you will develop the tone and audience in paragraphs that will justify your point-of-view/ approach//line of reasoning.

**After your essay, you will write a paragraph identifying the rhetorical devices you used to sway your audience.

**DO NOT INCLUDE RHETORICAL DEVICES IN THE FIRST ESSAY.

What Makes a Great Common App Essay?

 

A great Common App essay is, first and foremost, deeply personal. You are relying on the admissions committee to choose you over someone else, which they are more likely to do if they feel a personal connection to you. In your essay, you should delve into your feelings, how you think about situations/problems, and how you make decisions.

 

Good essays also usually avoid cliché topic such as sports accomplishment or injury. It’s not that these topics are bad, but rather that many students write about these subjects, so they don’t stand out as much. Of course, some students are able to write a genuine and unique essay about one of these topics, but it’s hard to pull off. You’re better off writing about more nuanced aspects of your identity!

 

You should also, of course, pay close attention to your grammar and spelling, use varied sentence structure and word choice, and be consistent with your tone/writing style. Take full advantage of the available 650 words, as writing less tends to mean missed opportunities.

 

Finally, it’s a good practice to be aware of your audience – know who you are writing for! For example, admissions officers at KING'S COLLEGE will probably be very religious, while those at DICKINSON will be deeply committed to social justice.

Here are the topics:

 1. Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?

2. Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?

3. Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?

4. Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

5. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

6.The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

ASSIGNMENT ?: TBD ONCE ESSAY 1 IS COMPLETED

ASSIGNMENT 2: a class mate will write a rhetorical analysis of your essay.

ASSIGNMENT 3: Complete the practice test for Unit 8.  This will be graded:  Due Sunday, 3/28 @ midnight (if you score 50% or higher, you will receive FULL credit.  Below 50% will be scaled appropriately)

ASSIGNMENT 4: MON. & TUES. , 3/29-3/30- IN CLASS-GRADED:  PROGRESS CHECK UNIT 8 FRQ 

ASSIGNMENT 5- WED., 3/31- TIMED, GRADED UNIT 8 MCQ TEST FOR PROGRESS CHECK

ASSIGNMENT 6:  TUES., 4/6  before you enter class.

Read and take notes in AP Practice book:  Pgs 184-200.  Take notes in your book, highlight, and illustrate your understanding (On each page, Write TA (Takeaway) and expand points in your own words).  **Detailed highlighting and notes per page

ASSUGNMENT 7: E, S, AND L

Read chapter 3 pgs. 68-103 - That'll do, comma

Take notes and turn in by FRIDAY, 4/9


Friday, March 19, 2021

ES & L

 Monday, 3/19

1. -Review Apostrophe section of E, S, and L

Apostrophe Link

*Possible quiz

2. Review Video notes from Unit 8 AP Classroom


3. Unit 8 AP Practice Quizzes- MCQ and FRQ due Wednesday, 3/25 @ midnight

Monday, March 15, 2021

AP Classroom Unit 8 videos

Due to www.turnitin.com by Thursday, 3/18

Directions:

1. Take notes

2. Provide SPECIFIC EXAMPLES

3. Explain examples and notes

4. Make a TIP section at the end of each video.  Provide personal tips learned from the content.

Unit 8 videos: 

Rhetorical Situation - Reading 1B 

AN ARGUMENT UNDERSTANDS AUDIENCE'S BELIEFS, VALUES OR NEEDS

Video 1: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/5q2ptozpx7?sui=12,8

Video 2: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/5k6v41vw9x?sui=12,8

Rhetorical Situation - Writing 2B

DEMONSTRATE AN UNDERSTANDING OF AUDIENCE'S  BELIEFS, VALUES OR NEEDS

Video 1: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/4u7bdyret2?sui=12,8

Video 2: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/swawo96tba?sui=12,8

Style - reading 7A

EXPLAIN HOW LANGUAGE CONTRIBUTES TO THE TONE AND STYLE.

Video 1: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/f5grb6rlr4?sui=12,8

Video 2: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/38d60nugfo?sui=12,8


Due to www.turnitin.com by Sunday, 3/21

Directions:

1. Take notes

2. Provide SPECIFIC EXAMPLES

3. Explain examples and notes

4. Make a TIP section at the end of each video.  Provide personal tips learned from the content.

Style- Writing 8A

STRATEGICALLY CHOOSE LANGUAGE TO CONVEY A SPEFIFIC TONE OR STYLE IN AN ARGUMENT.

Video 1: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/owb4hza92b?sui=12,8

Video 2: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/08bx6nugsx?sui=12,8


Style - Reading 7B

Video 1: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/ixmaqj96g4?sui=12,8

Video 2: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/v6ew9awyyk?sui=12,8

Style- Writing - 8B

WRITE SENTENCES THAT CLEARLY CONVEY IDEAS AND ARGUMENTS

Video 1: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/4k4xz6zpnv?sui=12,8

Video 2: https://apclassroom.collegeboard.org/d/57180bqasd?sui=12,8





Friday, March 5, 2021

Ch 7 Check, Rhetorical Analysis Review, and Book

Monday, 3/8- Work on the Ch 7 FRQ in AP Central - This is the GRADED check.  Due @ Midnight

Tuesday, 3/9- Read and Take notes in EAT, SHOOTS, LEAVES..CH. 1 AND CH. 2.   (Pg 1-68)

*(Please use the Post-its Given to you in class to mark:

A. Key Points

B. Talking/ Discussion Points

C. Quotable Quotes  Due for Friday

3/14-Graded AP Check for Unit 7 - Due Wednesday, 3/10 @ Midnight ..It will take 30 Minutes    **Please plan accordingly

Friday, 3/12-  ( This is an Asynchronous day) DUE BY THE END OF CLASS ON FRIDAY

Read the first 2 Chapters of EAT, SHOOTS, LEAVES

Notes for this assignment are due  before you enter class


Ch 7 AP Graded Progress Check is due on Sunday, 3/14 @ midnight

_______________________________________________

*We will read the main prompt together and create a SOAPSTONE

__________________________________________________________

DIRECTIONS FOR STUDENT ESSAY EVALUATION: 

1. Approach- 

               A. SOAPSTONE

              B.  What Rhetorical Strategies did the writer select for each essay?

              C. How did they incorporate their Rhetorical Devices in connection to their thesis?

2. Style- What stylistic elements did the writer use?

3. -Language- Evaluate the language utilized throughout the essay

6. Organization- Intro, Organization, Thesis, Parallel , Blueprint - Do they establish the foundation for the overarching thesis?

7. Claims and evidence- Generally jot down the claims in each paragraph and the evidence produced

8. Transitional fluency

9. Notable points from the AP Central Evaluation/ Commentaries


II. Directions:

A. Read the prompt, make your own SOAPSTONE

B. In Groups you will evaluate the essay samples graded by AP Central/ College Board.

C. Evaluate using the guidelines above.

D. Indicate the letter and grade assigned to each essay.

E. After you Review each essay, review the commentary provided by AP Central


III. Prompt:  

Evaluation Resources:

Rhetorical Analysis Prompt: http://bhscomp2.blogspot.com/2020/08/2018-frq-ra-prompt.html

Sample Essays: https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/pdf/ap-english-language-and-composition-2018-frq2-samples-2020-rubrics.pdf

Commentaries: https://secure-media.collegeboard.org/ap/pdf/ap-english-language-and-composition-2018-frq2-scoring-commentaries-2020-rubrics.pdf

Scoring Guidelines: https://secure-media.collegeboard.org/ap/pdf/ap-english-language-and-composition-2020-frq-scoring-guidelines-2018-exam-questions.pdf













Main pg link: https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/courses/ap-english-language-and-composition/exam

Links with questions and info:  https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/courses/ap-english-language-and-composition/exam/past-exam-questions?course=ap-english-language-and-composition

Wednesday, March 3, 2021

Rhetorical Analysis Evaluation - College Board Sample

REMEMBER TO REGISTER FOR THE AP  / COLLEGE BOARD/ BIG FUTURE COLLEGE FAIR ON SUNDAY!


Wednesday, 3/3- Today we will Evaluate the Rhetorical Analysis Essay

Thursday, 3/4- Unit 7 Practice MCQ Part 1 - timed

Friday, 3/5- Unit 7 Practice MCQ Part 2 - Not timed, due at Midnight

Looking Forward:

Graded AP Check - Due Wednesday, 3/10 @ Midnight ..It will take 30 Minutes

          **Please plan accordingly

Friday, 3/12-  ( This is an Asynchronous day) DUE BY THE END OF CLASS ON FRIDAY

Read the first 2 Chapters of EAT, SHOOTS, LEAVES

(Please use the Post-its Given to you in class to mark:

A. Key Points

B. Talking/ Discussion Points

C. Quotable Quotes

_______________________________________________

*We will read the main prompt together and create a SOAPSTONE

__________________________________________________________

DIRECTIONS FOR STUDENT ESSAY EVALUATION: 

1. Approach- 

               A. SOAPSTONE

              B.  What Rhetorical Strategies did the writer select for each essay?

              C. How did they incorporate their Rhetorical Devices in connection to their thesis?

2. Style- What stylistic elements did the writer use?

3. -Language- Evaluate the language utilized throughout the essay

6. Organization- Intro, Organization, Thesis, Parallel , Blueprint - Do they establish the foundation for the overarching thesis?

7. Claims and evidence- Generally jot down the claims in each paragraph and the evidence produced

8. Transitional fluency

9. Notable points from the AP Central Evaluation/ Commentaries


II. Directions:

A. Read the prompt, make your own SOAPSTONE

B. In Groups you will evaluate the essay samples graded by AP Central/ College Board.

C. Evaluate using the guidelines above.

D. Indicate the letter and grade assigned to each essay.

E. After you Review each essay, review the commentary provided by AP Central


III. Prompt:  

Evaluation Resources:

Rhetorical Analysis Prompt: http://bhscomp2.blogspot.com/2020/08/2018-frq-ra-prompt.html

Sample Essays: https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/pdf/ap-english-language-and-composition-2018-frq2-samples-2020-rubrics.pdf

Commentaries: https://secure-media.collegeboard.org/ap/pdf/ap-english-language-and-composition-2018-frq2-scoring-commentaries-2020-rubrics.pdf

Scoring Guidelines: https://secure-media.collegeboard.org/ap/pdf/ap-english-language-and-composition-2020-frq-scoring-guidelines-2018-exam-questions.pdf













Main pg link: https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/courses/ap-english-language-and-composition/exam

Links with questions and info:  https://apcentral.collegeboard.org/courses/ap-english-language-and-composition/exam/past-exam-questions?course=ap-english-language-and-composition